Senin, 15 Agustus 2011

Beloved



nih ada puisi dari ROG, ada 3 versi
versi asal, versi fathin, dan versi saya sendiri




versi asal-asalan:
made by: me and Anjar


i`m in love
with her and i feel fine
and sun shining everwhere
but to love her is to meet her everywhere
and keep calling her name
until in the end of time




Versi Fathin
YOU, THE BELOVED

With you, I feel calm 
The sun shines brightly 
But your eyes glow brighter than the sun 
That makes me want to continue to stand by you, looking at the beautiful eyes


An oddity in you that is why you do not have wings like an angel the other? 
When you are more beautiful than any other nymph 
If i hear the melodious and soft voice, I so want to sing you a beautiful symphony 
And hope you're listening to the strains of that song


Really made me curious question is "whether you have the same feeling with me?"
Hope you read this little poem that may not deserve to be read even created
And if one day we are destined to be standing close together, holding hands, and walk together, 
That's when i will not let you go and continue to love you until the end of time


I do always keep calling your name, continue to hold on and keep calling your name until the end of my life
Because I love you, and love you more than anything
MORE THAN ANYTHING




dan yang terakhir
Versi Buatan saya

YOU, MY BELOVED

The sky is blue.
The sunshine was shining at the blue sky.
But your eyes glow brighter than the sky and the sun.
That makes me want to continue to stands by you, looking at the beautiful eyes.
Because when i looking her eyes.
I just see the sky.


Why you don't have wings like the other angels ?
When you are more beautiful than the other nymphs.
If I hear the melodious and soft voice, so i want to sang to you a beautiful symphony
and hope you're listening to the strains of that song.


This is really made me curious, the question is "whether you have the same feeling with me?"
Hope you read this little poem that may not deserve to be read even created.
And if one day we are destined to be standing close together, holding hands, and walk together, that's when I will not let you go and continue to love you until the end of time.


I'm always keep calling your name, continue to hold on and keep calling your name until the end of my life.
Because I love you, and love you more than anything,
more than anything



sengaja judulnya di beda-bedain biar ketauan mana versinya masing-masing
sebenarnya yang panjang itu dibuat asli oleh FATHIN, tetapi saya edit-edit sedikit
thank you :)

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